10/15/2025
💡Two more tips to improve word choice:
Last week, I mentioned slowing down to let your work "cool."
When you revisit your work and make no further edits, you're ready for tips 2 and 3.
Tip 2: Let someone else read or hear your words.
Having something to say is one thing. Having something to say that is received well by your audience is an entirely different thing.
Case in point: A college hopeful used words in his entrance essay that implied a negative attitude toward his high school teachers. Forget the fact that the essay was well-structured. He was putting down educators, the very people who would judge his essay!
Luckily for him, he sought another set of eyes before submitting his final draft. Just a few changes in his choice of words shifted the tone of the essay from arrogance to confidence.
(He got accepted.)
When writing a book, be sure to employ editors to review your work. Different editors help with different aspects of writing.
A developmental editor considers the big picture, like organization, flow, and pacing. A copy editor or line editor works at the line level, revising aspects such as sentence structure, transitions, clarity, and redundancy.
After your editors, equally necessary is a proofreader, who makes sure your written delivery is free of any typos that would distract from your message.
Also, consider recruiting beta readers. Beta readers are people who review your manuscript for free ahead of the book release. They give early, honest feedback on how readers are responding to your words.
Tip 3: Be receptive.
Letting others review your work is useless unless you’re willing to consider their feedback.
I remember an executive who practiced a speech with me before a work function. I suggested that he replace a questionable joke, but he decided to keep it for laughs.
The joke didn’t sit well with a colleague, who later complained. He resolved the issue well, but the incident could’ve been avoided if he'd heeded another’s gut instincts.
You don’t have to accept every piece of advice. If you don’t agree with a comment, put it on the back burner and ask others.
Employ the “two people in agreement” rule. If another listener, beta reader, or editor makes the same comment, then it’s a signal that you should reconsider.
The important thing is to resist arguing or taking offense. Most beta readers aren’t out to get you.
Give the benefit of the doubt and assume they just want to help you, even if they’re wrong. Handle negative comments with graciousness and humility, then say, “That’s a good point. I’ll take that into consideration.”
Thanks to the Nonfiction Authors Association for publishing this series as a guest post!