29/09/2024
I've been doing a little work on my script/book lately and here is what i got for just me entering school in my True Story of when i was younger and lived in a haunted house. Let me know what yall think. I need to do more writing, so i will do more writing tomorrow because I'm not even halfway done with it.
This is just one small part of "4785". I will post another small part tomorrow, if I get that far on it and I like it.
Please Critic it and let me know .
They arrived at school finally and he bids farewell to his new friend Charles as he enters this school for the first time. Chris stepped into his new school (Hustonville Elementary) with a mix of excitement and trepidation. His first day was uneventful—a few awkward introductions, a couple of friendly smiles. Yet, as the day unfolded, an unsettling thought kept gnawing at the corners of his mind, veiling his attempts at focus. He couldn’t shake the persistent image of his house. There was something about the way the shadows danced in the corners of his bedroom and the way the wind whispered through the cracked windows that sent a chill down his spine. As he navigated the hallways, an ominous feeling lingered around his body, like the house wanted him to return to it.
