12/04/2025
The little girl knelt on the floor, tiny hands red and aching. Her stepmother shouted, âClean it properly! If you canât, then you donât get to eat!â Exhaustion overtook her, and her breath became shallow and uneven. Then, the door flew open. Her fatherâa soldierâhad returned earlier than expected. He froze at the sight, then roared, âMy daughter⌠who did this to her?!â Marissa turned pale as Lena whispered, âDaddy⌠it hurtsâŚâ and his anger erupted.
The scrape of a brush against the wooden floor echoed sharply through the hallway, out of place in what should have been a calm home. Seven-year-old Lena Hartley knelt on shaky knees, palms raw and burning, scrubbing at a stain long vanished. Sweat ran down her forehead, hunger twisted her stomach.
âClean it properly!â Marissa snapped, arms crossed, her voice icy. âIf you canât, you donât eat. Understand?â
Lena nodded weakly, continuing, though the brush slipped from her fingers. She hadnât slept, barely eaten, and Marissaâs endless chores and criticism weighed heavily.
Her breathing grew shallow, arms trembling. The hallway seemed to sway. She finally collapsed, brush falling from her hands.
âDonât stop,â Marissa ordered. âYou spilled juice on my rug yesterday. This is the lesson you need.â
Lenaâs chest tightened; she gasped, vision blurred, and sank to the floor.
Then the door burst open.
Urgent footsteps rang out. Captain Lucas Hartley, home from deployment, stood at the hallway entrance, his duffel bag hitting the floor.
His eyes widened at the sight of his daughter struggling.
âLena?â His voice broke. âSweetheartâwhat happened?!â
Lena lifted her head slightly. âDaddy⌠it hurtsâŚâ
Shock, disbelief, then a fierce, trembling rage flashed across Lucasâs face.
He turned to Marissa. âMy daughter⌠who did this to her?â
Marissa stammered. âLucasâsheâs exaggerating. She just needs to learn responsibilityââ
But Lucas knelt beside Lena, lifting her gently into his arms. She sobbed against his shoulder.
âDaddyâs here,â he murmured. âDaddyâs got you now.â
For the first time in months, Lena felt safe.
To be continued in Comment đ