12/30/2024
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12/09/2024
Structure, Organization, Pacing: Please choose the statement that best applies to this book.
Reviewer 1
This book is adequate in its structure, organization, and pacing. Improvements need to be made in two or more of these areas to aid in the reader's understanding and/or enjoyment of the book.
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Spelling, Punctuation, Grammar: Please choose the statement that best applies to this book.
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This book has spelling, punctuation, and grammar corresponding with the region of the world from which the author hails (ex. British English or American English) or with where the book is set (including slang, vernacular, or dialect). These choices are intentional and implemented consistently throughout with few, if any, errors.
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Production Quality and Cover Design: Please choose the statement that best applies to this book.
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This book is satisfactory in production quality and cover design. The physical materials, printing, and binding are mostly of professional quality. The typesetting and page layout (including illustrations, images, or figures) are largely designed but have some errors or inconsistencies. The cover could benefit from improvements to the overall design quality, and/or in relation to the genre/content of the book.
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Plot, Story, or Topic Appeal: Please choose the statement that best applies to this book.
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This book is satisfactory in its choice of topic or theme for the story. It has some unique elements and will appeal to many readers in its intended genre. If the book is fiction or narrative nonfiction, the book has a plot but could use some improvements. If the book is poetry or prescriptive nonfiction, the theme or delivery of information works but could use improvement.
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Character Appeal and Development: Please choose the statement that best applies to this book.
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This book is satisfactory in character appeal and development. Most main characters are developed and have appealing or interesting aspects but could use more complex motivations. Secondary characters may have a purpose but have few unique characteristics.
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Voice and Writing Style: Please choose the statement that best applies to this book.
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This book is satisfactory in its voice and writing style. Both are generally consistent throughout but may need to improve on uniqueness. The style and tone may appeal to readers of its intended genre.
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In a few explanatory sentences, please share with the entrant 1-3 of the most important aspects that need to be improved for this book to be more appealing/useful to readers and why.
Reviewer 1
The cover art is amateurish and would be better to have photo or no images on the current background. Chapters 6-50 are Terrence's description of how he came to be, what he is and the research that was being performed. This is basically the background information to create the story as Chapter 52 is where the story starts with a synopsis of what happened as a result of Terrence's role and leaves the story open for another book. If this is meant to be a series, each book should stand alone with a distinct story. The book should start with the information in Chapter 52 and then his story is told with the information from the preceding chapters used to show how it effected Terrene and his role.
In a few explanatory sentences, please share with the entrant 1-3 things that you enjoyed or that readers will find compelling about this book and why.
Reviewer 1
This book will appeal to readers of science fiction.
