12/04/2023
📚Today, I'd like to shed some light on a comma conundrum that often perplexes many, especially in the world of fiction writing. I’ve been known to break this rule. 🧐
📌 The Comma Rule: When it comes to commas and coordinating conjunctions, remember this essential guideline: if the subject does not appear in front of the second verb, a comma is generally unnecessary. 📝
🧩 In a sentence like "She ate her dessert and smiled," the subject "She" applies to both actions "ate" and "smiled." In such cases, it's generally best to skip the comma and keep the narrative flowing smoothly.
📖 However, here's where fiction writers can unleash their creativity and play with words. In fiction, you're not confined to the rigid rules of grammar; you're the master of your narrative! 🎭
🖌️ You can intentionally break this rule to achieve specific effects. Commas can be your artistic tools, allowing you to craft unique rhythms, build tension, or emphasize certain actions or thoughts. 🎨
📜 For instance, "She ate her dessert, and, to her surprise, smiled," uses commas strategically to emphasize her surprise. This choice is deliberate, adding depth to the character's emotions and thoughts.
💭 So, writers, don't be afraid to experiment and bend the rules when the story demands it. Let your commas convey not just words but emotions, nuances, and vivid imagery.
🔗 In the end, the comma rule is a valuable tool in your editorial arsenal, but it's important to wield it with finesse and creativity. 📢✨
📚 As a dedicated copyeditor and proofreader for fiction authors, I'm here to help you navigate these delicate nuances in your writing. Together, we can ensure your story shines brightly while respecting the rules and breaking them when it's right for your narrative.